Chapter 5: Was My Lucky Yellow Dress... Lucky Enough?
Hi There!
Thanks for visiting my "Love At First Sight" blog and giving it your love. I am happy to announce that I am in the process of restructuring / rewriting the entire story to take it to the next level and have it published as a novel. For that purpose, unfortunately I have to take the blog posts down. I hope you would understand π
If you are visiting this blog for the first time, then please wait for my novel to get published and read it then.
Regular followers, if you are missing Disha and Anirudh, they will be back soon. And it wouldn’t matter if you have already read their love story, I’ll make sure to add a lot more narration and new events in the book. For all that, I definitely need your good wishes and support.
Much love!!
-Anu
ReplyDeleteOH.MY. MY This is the most beautiful love story... it should be made into a movie. I want copyrights... Haha
I wish you released all the next chapters altogether π
Dost tere liya jaan hazir hai.. copyrights is nothing..
DeleteI can do that.. release all chapters in one go.. but then you will have to wait for months for it to finish π
Awwww... It is such a cute love story yar... Description is so vivid that I can feel the story.. write next chapter soon... I'm eagerly waiting.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta π₯° π₯° will write next one soon π
DeleteAtlast they met .. Beautifully written ..N perfect song for perfect scene ..
ReplyDeleteThanks bhabhi π₯° was listening to this song so decided to give this ending π
DeleteI couldn't stop smiling for an entire minute, thrice while reading this. And "The Yellow Dress" as I wanted has become my favourite part most loved color dress. I have to go buy one now even though I have many! The connection towards this story is just inexplicable. It makes you feel so so GOOD! ❤❤❤
ReplyDeleteAwwww such a beautiful comment Nikita π₯° since you asked about the yellow dress the other day.. I made this chapter around it ☺️ so some credit goes to you too
DeleteOh dear. This took me to our old and golden days.. sitting on that cliff, staring at the sunset, never wanting to go back home.... yeah.. that's how we spent countless hours together....BTW, you never shared how u felt then so this is a good read to finally know what u had in your heart.. yellow dress is indeed a magic.. ππ
ReplyDeleteYou, me, Mahavir tekri, and sunsets.. so many.. sunsets.
DeleteLove you patidev for such a lovely comment π
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DeleteAnirudh and Disha spotted π
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DeleteExcellent narration of the inner feelings, I felt the characters lively Mam, eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lokesh.. but please stop calling me mam π gaye wo cmc wale din π
DeleteAwesome..
ReplyDeleteStory line.. Characters, Situation sab itna accha likha hai ki... Dimag me puri movie si chal rahi hai....
Roopesh
Thanks Roopesh ππ
DeleteLucky yellow dress proved its worth again. . Lovely yaar
ReplyDeleteThanks Vidushi π₯°
DeleteBeautiful love story. Finally they met...π.and the song Kuch na kahoo was the cherry π on top.
ReplyDeleteThanks π₯° that's my favourite song.. such meaningful lyrics by Javed sir..
DeleteKeep writing Anu.
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Thanks Saumya ππ
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ReplyDeleteI recalled all of mine one sided love stories during my college time where I was trying my best to be near to my semester love but at the same time they are searching other place to hide from my reach. π€
They all knew, the moment they pass a simple smile to me, News will be floated in our college and also nearby colleges that ki pat gai. π
Hhahaa One sided love π good one Sandeep ji
DeleteAwww, so so fantabulous, gives a smile going back to hostel life and seeing many love bird stories blooming in hostel and college life, hahahaπππ
ReplyDeleteThanks Arti.. Hostel life was best ππ
DeleteWhoa! Awestruck. A lovely read it was. I could literally feel every single emotion you penned. Do post the next part soon <3 :)
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Awestruck. A lovely read it was. I could literally feel every single emotion you penned. Do post the next part soon <3 :)
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Awestruck. A lovely read it was. I could literally feel every single emotion you penned. Do post the next part soon <3 :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sravya for your lovely words ππ
DeleteNarration at its bestπ waiting for the next chapter
ReplyDeleteThanks Thanuja π₯°π
DeleteSo wonderfully written...it's always nice reading your blog posts ....it has all the ingredients of a wonderful love story .....like always this note also feels relatable ......thanks for putting time out for writing ...
ReplyDeleteAnd as always my thanks goes to you.. for motivating me to do something different..
DeleteWoww.. bus journey and college trip added much more beauty to the love story π
ReplyDeleteThanks Hemannth π₯°
DeleteVery well written anu, the way chapter 4 ended, I was not expecting them to reconcile in such a beautiful way, you captured all the emotions so well, sell it to an OTT platform already…this can be a good web series..almost everyone can relate to it…and by the way pixie hair ki background story bhi batao yaar… :-)
ReplyDeleteHey Deependra.. thanks π
DeleteIt feels to good to see complements like these..
web series is out of reach.. but I am happy that I am able to create a scene with my words.
Done π you will get Prachi's story in coming chapters..
Spectacular Anuπ₯°π₯°... so beautifully explained the feelings of first love which almost occurs in everyone’s life I think ... I am sure whoever would read it will see himself/ herself in the place of leading characters of the story....
ReplyDelete(jisko pyar nahi hua wo bhi ππ)
wonderfully narrated.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
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Thanks Surabhi π
DeleteI still remember your first date with KK sir post engagement.. wapas aane ke baad humne bahut khichai ki thi tumhari ππ
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DeleteAlright.... As you proceed further in this story, it seems to be getting more interesting.... Keep sharing more ... Waiting for the next!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Abhineet π
DeleteVery good narration. I love it π
ReplyDeleteThanks Swathi π
DeleteCollege days trips were fun and memoriable. You made to cherish those old memories again. This chapter a lot of cuteness and a little jealous but you ignored poor pulkit.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite lines in this chapter are
" I looked up at him and he saw right through me"
Hey Jagan.. good that you have noticed about Pulkit.. will add more content on him in next chapter. Each chapter size is growing exponentially to fit in so many things π
DeleteBeautiful selection of ur favourite lines..
OMG its amazing love story dear
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandhya π
DeleteExcellent writing Anu. While reading I'm blushing all the time. Haha... Nice story yaar. This is Nikhil
ReplyDeleteHahaha thanks Nikhil π
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ReplyDeleteSimply fantastic!! I am loving it!!πππππ
ReplyDeleteThanks Maitrayee ππ
DeleteAwesome... It reminds my old days too... Very well written.. keep writing such wonderful stories.. waiting for next one ... π
ReplyDeleteThanks Gyanu.. I am happy you liked it ππ
DeleteNice description abt the feeling of first love with loved one....I'll always be waiting for ur next blog..
ReplyDeleteLove u dear
Thanks Pranita.. love you too sweetheart π₯°
DeleteAhhh.. now this time it not only touched my π but bought goosebumps π... beautiful wali feeling.....like sinking in loveπ...one secret I want to share with u. .I read ur story more than 5 times....and u know I never felt like I have already read it earlier or I knew this before.... everytime it's so fresh, pure, innocent ...real... charismatic....pls pls write next one.....loving it π
ReplyDeleteSeema darling.. your comment has made my day.. love you more and more..
DeleteMay be because we are best friends since 1998 if not before.. I always wait for your approval for anything I do. And when I see you like my work I go all euphoric.. yay!!!!
Waiting eagerly for chapter 6 ☺️.
ReplyDeleteCouldn't find time this week.. so unfortunately.. next chapter will be delayed by a week this time π¬
DeleteWow.. amazing ... really touched my π heart Anu..keep on writingπ
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot π₯°π
DeleteYaar.. please publish next chapter soon..can't wait ..:)
ReplyDeleteThank you unknown friend π¬ if you can share your name in reply I would inform you once next chapter is up.
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