Chapter 5: Was My Lucky Yellow Dress... Lucky Enough?

Hi There!

Thanks for visiting my "Love At First Sight" blog and giving it your love. I am happy to announce that I am in the process of restructuring / rewriting the entire story to take it to the next level and have it published as a novel. For that purpose, unfortunately I have to take the blog posts down. I hope you would understand πŸ˜Š

If you are visiting this blog for the first time, then please wait for my novel to get published and read it then.

Regular followers, if you are missing Disha and Anirudh, they will be back soon. And it wouldn’t matter if you have already read their love story, I’ll make sure to add a lot more narration and new events in the book. For all that, I definitely need your good wishes and support. 

Much love!! 
-Anu 

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  1. OH.MY. MY This is the most beautiful love story... it should be made into a movie. I want copyrights... Haha
    I wish you released all the next chapters altogether 😍

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    1. Dost tere liya jaan hazir hai.. copyrights is nothing..

      I can do that.. release all chapters in one go.. but then you will have to wait for months for it to finish 😊

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  2. Awwww... It is such a cute love story yar... Description is so vivid that I can feel the story.. write next chapter soon... I'm eagerly waiting.

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    1. Thanks Shweta πŸ₯° πŸ₯° will write next one soon πŸ‘

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  3. Atlast they met .. Beautifully written ..N perfect song for perfect scene ..

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    1. Thanks bhabhi πŸ₯° was listening to this song so decided to give this ending 😊

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  4. I couldn't stop smiling for an entire minute, thrice while reading this. And "The Yellow Dress" as I wanted has become my favourite part most loved color dress. I have to go buy one now even though I have many! The connection towards this story is just inexplicable. It makes you feel so so GOOD! ❤❤❤

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    1. Awwww such a beautiful comment Nikita πŸ₯° since you asked about the yellow dress the other day.. I made this chapter around it ☺️ so some credit goes to you too

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  5. Oh dear. This took me to our old and golden days.. sitting on that cliff, staring at the sunset, never wanting to go back home.... yeah.. that's how we spent countless hours together....BTW, you never shared how u felt then so this is a good read to finally know what u had in your heart.. yellow dress is indeed a magic.. 😊😊

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    1. You, me, Mahavir tekri, and sunsets.. so many.. sunsets.
      Love you patidev for such a lovely comment 😘

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    2. Ohh Ho
      Anirudh and Disha spotted 😜

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  6. Excellent narration of the inner feelings, I felt the characters lively Mam, eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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    1. Thanks Lokesh.. but please stop calling me mam 😊 gaye wo cmc wale din 😁

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  7. Awesome..
    Story line.. Characters, Situation sab itna accha likha hai ki... Dimag me puri movie si chal rahi hai....

    Roopesh

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  8. Lucky yellow dress proved its worth again. . Lovely yaar

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  9. Beautiful love story. Finally they met...πŸ’ž.and the song Kuch na kahoo was the cherry πŸ’ on top.

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    1. Thanks πŸ₯° that's my favourite song.. such meaningful lyrics by Javed sir..

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  10. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    I recalled all of mine one sided love stories during my college time where I was trying my best to be near to my semester love but at the same time they are searching other place to hide from my reach. πŸ€”
    They all knew, the moment they pass a simple smile to me, News will be floated in our college and also nearby colleges that ki pat gai. πŸ˜‚

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    1. Hhahaa One sided love πŸ˜€ good one Sandeep ji

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  11. Awww, so so fantabulous, gives a smile going back to hostel life and seeing many love bird stories blooming in hostel and college life, hahahaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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    1. Thanks Arti.. Hostel life was best πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  12. Whoa! Awestruck. A lovely read it was. I could literally feel every single emotion you penned. Do post the next part soon <3 :)

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  13. Whoa! Awestruck. A lovely read it was. I could literally feel every single emotion you penned. Do post the next part soon <3 :)

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  14. Whoa! Awestruck. A lovely read it was. I could literally feel every single emotion you penned. Do post the next part soon <3 :)

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    1. Thanks Sravya for your lovely words 😊😊

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  15. Narration at its bestπŸ’– waiting for the next chapter

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  16. So wonderfully written...it's always nice reading your blog posts ....it has all the ingredients of a wonderful love story .....like always this note also feels relatable ......thanks for putting time out for writing ...

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    1. And as always my thanks goes to you.. for motivating me to do something different..

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  17. Woww.. bus journey and college trip added much more beauty to the love story 😍

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  18. Very well written anu, the way chapter 4 ended, I was not expecting them to reconcile in such a beautiful way, you captured all the emotions so well, sell it to an OTT platform already…this can be a good web series..almost everyone can relate to it…and by the way pixie hair ki background story bhi batao yaar… :-)

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    1. Hey Deependra.. thanks 😊
      It feels to good to see complements like these..
      web series is out of reach.. but I am happy that I am able to create a scene with my words.

      Done πŸ‘ you will get Prachi's story in coming chapters..

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  19. Spectacular AnuπŸ₯°πŸ₯°... so beautifully explained the feelings of first love which almost occurs in everyone’s life I think ... I am sure whoever would read it will see himself/ herself in the place of leading characters of the story....
    (jisko pyar nahi hua wo bhi 😜😜)
    wonderfully narrated.
    Can’t wait for the next chapter
    😘😘

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    1. Thanks Surabhi 😊
      I still remember your first date with KK sir post engagement.. wapas aane ke baad humne bahut khichai ki thi tumhari 😜😜

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  20. Alright.... As you proceed further in this story, it seems to be getting more interesting.... Keep sharing more ... Waiting for the next!!

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  21. Very good narration. I love it 😍

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  22. College days trips were fun and memoriable. You made to cherish those old memories again. This chapter a lot of cuteness and a little jealous but you ignored poor pulkit.

    My favourite lines in this chapter are
    " I looked up at him and he saw right through me"

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    1. Hey Jagan.. good that you have noticed about Pulkit.. will add more content on him in next chapter. Each chapter size is growing exponentially to fit in so many things 😁

      Beautiful selection of ur favourite lines..

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  23. Excellent writing Anu. While reading I'm blushing all the time. Haha... Nice story yaar. This is Nikhil

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  25. Simply fantastic!! I am loving it!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘Œ

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  26. Awesome... It reminds my old days too... Very well written.. keep writing such wonderful stories.. waiting for next one ... 😊

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    1. Thanks Gyanu.. I am happy you liked it πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  27. Nice description abt the feeling of first love with loved one....I'll always be waiting for ur next blog..
    Love u dear

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    1. Thanks Pranita.. love you too sweetheart πŸ₯°

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  28. Ahhh.. now this time it not only touched my πŸ’“ but bought goosebumps πŸ˜‰... beautiful wali feeling.....like sinking in loveπŸ’ž...one secret I want to share with u. .I read ur story more than 5 times....and u know I never felt like I have already read it earlier or I knew this before.... everytime it's so fresh, pure, innocent ...real... charismatic....pls pls write next one.....loving it 😍

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    1. Seema darling.. your comment has made my day.. love you more and more..

      May be because we are best friends since 1998 if not before.. I always wait for your approval for anything I do. And when I see you like my work I go all euphoric.. yay!!!!

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  29. Waiting eagerly for chapter 6 ☺️.

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    1. Couldn't find time this week.. so unfortunately.. next chapter will be delayed by a week this time 😬

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  30. Wow.. amazing ... really touched my πŸ’• heart Anu..keep on writing😘

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  31. Yaar.. please publish next chapter soon..can't wait ..:)

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    1. Thank you unknown friend 😬 if you can share your name in reply I would inform you once next chapter is up.

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