Chapter 10: Was It Over?

Hi There!

Thanks for visiting my "Love At First Sight" blog and giving it your love. I am happy to announce that I am in the process of restructuring / rewriting the entire story to take it to the next level and have it published as a novel. For that purpose, unfortunately I have to take the blog posts down. I hope you would understand 😊

If you are visiting this blog for the first time, then please wait for my novel to get published and read it then.

Regular followers, if you are missing Disha and Anirudh, they will be back soon. And it wouldn’t matter if you have already read their love story, I’ll make sure to add a lot more narration and new events in the book. For all that, I definitely need your good wishes and support. 

Much love!! 
-Anu 

Comments

  1. ArchanaNovember 16, 2020 at 10:09 PM

    Simply Wonderful writing Anu .I loved each and every detail in Anirudh’d diary ..you summarized the remaining 3 years after their break up so beautifully ..
    Loved the last paragraph.. for the known reason .. finally they met 😍😍 ..
    Looking forward for the next chapter

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    1. Anu JainNovember 17, 2020 at 11:41 AM

      Thanks Archu.. This was the toughest one to write. Bringing them that close in previous chapter and then this...

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  2. Nikita Annabel GandhamNovember 16, 2020 at 11:22 PM

    *Tears*

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  3. GarimaNovember 17, 2020 at 12:08 AM

    It’s magical Anu... Loved it 😍

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  4. srideviNovember 17, 2020 at 9:06 AM

    Wonderfully narrated Anu dear

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  5. PoonamNovember 17, 2020 at 3:10 PM

    Can this go anymore dramatic? Loved each &every diary entry. You made sure to keep the dates as per the timings of events in previous chapters. like 3 wks of dancing....then fest.. then her bday... then thr brkup.
    Again curiosity increased at the end. Why the entry of this new shadi.com guy? Now plz make Anirudh happy.. they should patchup.

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    1. Anu JainNovember 17, 2020 at 8:18 PM

      Thanks Poonam.. loved your comment.. and loved the fact that you noticed and compared the mentioned dates and timing of events 😁

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  6. SrideviNovember 17, 2020 at 7:55 PM

    Wowww...simply amazing narration..was able to connect with the feelings of the characters...Anu dear take a bow to your writing skills..

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    1. Anu JainNovember 17, 2020 at 8:22 PM

      Thanks a lot Sridevi (from Microsoft 😀) so much confusion 😵😅

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  7. ArtiNovember 18, 2020 at 5:17 PM

    Amazing, mind blowing... 3years journey with all dates captured... Wonderfully narrated

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  8. KrishnaNovember 19, 2020 at 8:18 PM

    Thank you for writing the truth that guys also have emotions. It is always portrayed that boys don’t have feelings. But they do, and they cry too. And your blog made me cry Anu Ma'am.

    I went back to my breakup days, when I didnt leave my hostel room for a week after breakup.

    Amazing word play, you connect to me and all others like its our story.

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    1. Anu JainNovember 19, 2020 at 11:33 PM

      Thanks Krishna 🙏 I am so happy that you are reading and liking my blog 😊

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  9. UnknownNovember 20, 2020 at 3:24 PM

    Idea of dairy is awesome. Three years and important dates in a single go. 🥰🥰
    Narration was simply superb.
    Awesome Anu🥰👍👌
    Aparna

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  10. Lokesh MaghamNovember 21, 2020 at 11:07 PM

    The last moment at the hosiptal, "Citi bajayeeee" 😘 finally..

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  11. digi cool_samyNovember 22, 2020 at 1:09 AM

    Whistle!!! Whistle! Whistle!!! 👌👌👌Simply amazing. Loved each and every small details of his diary ...such an emotional moment when she hugs Anirudh after years. What a beautiful turn in the story.... Eagerly waiting for the next series. 😘😘😘😘💕💕💕

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  12. PranitaNovember 22, 2020 at 12:41 PM

    Finally the lovebirds r together...happy for Anirudh and Disha....
    Anu I'm living in ur story....wow dear Author love u alot

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  13. Make knowledge FreeNovember 22, 2020 at 11:10 PM

    Wonderful ...
    Every word you draft weaves magic .... this was again a very beautiful illustration .....falling in love with the story more and more

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  14. SandeepNovember 23, 2020 at 5:48 PM

    I generally read things with my mind and so make better judgment about the writing and the story. This part was from heart so can’t tell much how well you have written it, that I was able to correlate each and everything with some broken past of mine which is not exactly the same but somehow very similar. How do you know to read a guy mind this well, is Anirudh helping you to write these diaries entry. Till now it was looking to me a every college crush story but this one has evolved to a level where it makes the readers/audiences engrossed into it in such a way that they stop sensing the words here but correlating some of their pasts. Last time I told in my comment that I would have time travelled in some different version but with this story I can say the version might be the same. This can be a award winning writeup or a story of a cult movie like Notebook.

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    1. Anu JainNovember 24, 2020 at 4:08 PM

      Awesome Awesome Awesome!!!!
      Yes it was really difficult to understand how guys feel. Are they also emotional like girls? How would they write a diary if they have to.. your comment gave me assurance that I captured atleast some part of it right 🙏

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    2. Anu JainNovember 24, 2020 at 4:13 PM

      And to answer your question 😃 -
      No, my personal Anirudh is not helping me in writing anything 😆😆😆

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  15. Surabhi SinghNovember 23, 2020 at 11:22 PM

    There you are Anu... beautiful... simply amazing... the diary entries of Anirudh... fabulous.... I was only waiting for them to meet... looking forward for next chapter.... loved it💕💕

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    1. Anu JainNovember 24, 2020 at 4:09 PM

      Thanks Surabhi for the lovely review ❤️❤️

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  16. Teju ReddyNovember 24, 2020 at 6:38 PM

    Reading Someone's diary!! that too our Loved one's whom we broke will break our heart undoubtedly,
    she might not pass her eye on him sometimes but his diary did.
    "Remembering her crying face in the rain when she broke off with me. She thought I couldn’t see her tears which were way heavier than the rain droplets on her face. I know she still loves me."
    That damn confidence for a guy is Indeed.
    I just want to re-collect each & every word from the diary sequence to appreciate your thoughtful writing.
    It's just a flow with which everyone's heart connected (the people who are reading). Hearty Congratulations Dear, you are proving everytime that how much Your writings are Unique.

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    1. Anu JainNovember 24, 2020 at 11:35 PM

      Like always... Loved each word of your review 💗
      Thanks 🙏

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  17. jaganyallaNovember 27, 2020 at 9:00 PM

    It was a beautiful way to portrait to all three years in Dairy form, quick and cute. Would like to see D 's part of three sides also(Coin has both sides, seeing other side is quite important)?

    I felt you have read minds of many love failure people. Anger, sadness, jealous, love, recollecting the feelings of same day again and again , everything you have sketched perfectly.

    I was still confused why didn't D speak after 4 years of Engineering and how did she get the Diary?

    Somehow Anirudh told I hate you more times than I love you in Diary. When is Anirudh going to kidnap D? (Whom did you kidnap and how did you get this idea, lol)

    There are multiple places it touch me but below lines are every men hope

    "Remembering her crying face in the rain when she broke off with me. She thought I couldn’t see her tears which were way heavier than the rain droplets on her face. I know she still loves me"


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    1. Anu JainNovember 29, 2020 at 12:47 AM

      Hey Jagan.. finally your review. I always wait for your perception of my each chapter.
      To answer your question, I think their ego and hesitation did not let them talk again even when they both wanted to. And how did she get his diary..... let it be a mystery for now.

      Sad he did not kidnap her to figure things out between them, but I am definitely going to try that angle in one of my future blogs.

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  18. Sandhya singhDecember 1, 2020 at 11:31 AM

    Outstanding again dear........specially diary entries mention withs date....... Its more effective feeling n greater impact to ur chapter............mind blowing

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    1. Anu JainDecember 4, 2020 at 12:41 AM

      Thanks sweetheart.. lots of love to you ❤️

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  19. VidhiDecember 5, 2020 at 1:51 PM

    Anu I wish you would write all the chapters at once. This pending verdict is killing me lol. Such detailed and specific description of everything. SPECTACULAR!

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    1. Anu JainDecember 5, 2020 at 10:47 PM

      Thanks Vidhi.. I wish I could... But I will try to publish my next story in novel form 👍

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  20. ShaliniDecember 6, 2020 at 7:19 PM

    Superb! Loved the diary part, it is so real as if it’s real diary of someone. Hats off to you!
    Finally they face each other again. Next chapter please!

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    1. Anu JainDecember 7, 2020 at 3:01 AM

      Thanks Shalini.. I used to write diary in my college days. So idea came from there.. my diary is loaded with poems.. so I wrote one for Anirudh too ☺️☺️

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    2. Anu JainDecember 7, 2020 at 3:02 AM

      Next chapter just added.. please check it out 😊

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  21. UnknownDecember 19, 2020 at 11:49 PM

    Wow...it's beautifully written..So heart touching...
    That Diary part is brilliant..
    You have put in lot of thoughts in writing his diary...
    One can feel the pain of Anirudh...

    In first few entries he referred her as D...but in later entry when he was furious with her..he writes 'Disha I hate you...'
    Wow.. Kitni choti se choti cheez pe dhyan diya hai...
    Potraying characters and their feelings so well...is an Art..You are an Artist ..a soulful Artist🙏🙏🙏😀


    Roopesh Sharma


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    1. Anu JainDecember 20, 2020 at 1:40 PM

      Thanks Roopesh for your appreciation 🙏😊

      Like writing is an art, reading and grasping it all is also an art.. so I feel you are also an artist 😁

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