Chapter 8: To Grow Old With You, I Yearn!

Hi There!

Thanks for visiting my "Love At First Sight" blog and giving it your love. I am happy to announce that I am in the process of restructuring / rewriting the entire story to take it to the next level and have it published as a novel. For that purpose, unfortunately I have to take the blog posts down. I hope you would understand 😊

If you are visiting this blog for the first time, then please wait for my novel to get published and read it then.

Regular followers, if you are missing Disha and Anirudh, they will be back soon. And it wouldn’t matter if you have already read their love story, I’ll make sure to add a lot more narration and new events in the book. For all that, I definitely need your good wishes and support. 

Much love!! 
-Anu 

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  1. Nikita Annabel GandhamOctober 24, 2020 at 6:47 PM

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  2. Nikita Annabel GandhamOctober 24, 2020 at 6:49 PM

    My heart is pounding with happiness! How can any story be so fictional yet so realistic? I LOVE IT, I LOVE THEM, I LOVE EVERYTHING of this story! It is one of the closest things to my heart ❤❤❤

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  3. Make knowledge FreeOctober 24, 2020 at 7:13 PM

    What can I say ? You are really a fabulous writer and the way you evoke emotions with your words is really wonderful .....great article once again ....pleasure to read.

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  4. UnknownOctober 24, 2020 at 7:34 PM

    Love at first sight...loved it
    Bike ride experience was fabulous...It reminded me the first bike ride with my hero(husband now...)...
    Waiting for the next....
    Love u
    Pranita

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  5. jaganyallaOctober 24, 2020 at 9:26 PM

    Fantastic yar. Faboulous writing. You made it very beautiful and Its like travelling with characters when I was reading it.
    It was quite opposite to my life after first year. I felt bad I didn't learn bike driving during college days.

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    1. Anu JainOctober 24, 2020 at 11:51 PM

      Thanks Jagan 😊

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    2. jaganyallaOctober 28, 2020 at 9:58 PM

      I missed many points , when I read it again, I understood that you were still following my biopic😝

      It was quite famous dialogue in my story ”I felt like I was something edible to him. It was so weird in all possible ways".

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    3. Anu JainOctober 28, 2020 at 10:00 PM

      Haha good one Jagan 😜

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    4. Anu JainOctober 28, 2020 at 10:02 PM

      Someday you have to share your college life with me.. I may get a story for my next blog 😃

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  6. Sandhya singhOctober 24, 2020 at 10:41 PM

    Mind blowing yaar...... . unspeakable quality............. It’s perfect. Like you.

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    1. Anu JainOctober 24, 2020 at 11:53 PM

      Thanks sweetheart.. your painting is also perfect like you 😘

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  7. PoonamOctober 25, 2020 at 1:24 AM

    Anu I never knew this side of you..... what a talent girl!! where were you hiding before? Very soon we will have to wait for your autograph. - Poonam

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    1. PoonamOctober 25, 2020 at 1:27 AM

      It took me 4 times to post my review, there is some problem with their website.

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    2. Anu JainOctober 25, 2020 at 3:38 PM

      Thank you Poonam 🥰

      Yes looks like some issue in website. Lot many have reported same thing.

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  8. Lokesh MaghamOctober 25, 2020 at 10:05 AM

    This “To feel your love, I burn!
    To grow old with you, I yearn!” can be bench marked for love, awesome drafting for the characters. Describing the relation "More than friends and less than a romantic couple" is simply superbbbb...

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  9. Thanuja KarriOctober 25, 2020 at 11:34 PM

    Take my heart 💖

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  10. AnonymousOctober 26, 2020 at 5:54 PM

    So beautifully written di. loved it. Why does it look like they are not going to be together? Please don't do that to us. -Priyanka

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    1. Anu JainOctober 26, 2020 at 11:26 PM

      Thanks Priyanka..
      Please forgive me in advance 😬🙏

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  11. VidushiOctober 26, 2020 at 8:45 PM

    Please don't tell me it's going to end it here! Last bike ride, to the end!

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    1. Anu JainOctober 26, 2020 at 11:29 PM

      I have written most of the next chapter already and felt real sad writing it. Hope I will be forgiven for coming chapter 😬

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  12. Isha VankineniOctober 26, 2020 at 11:10 PM

    “Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader—not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon.”

    You have beautifully given justice to the characters....The intricate detailing that you bring to the chapters creates a good reading experience.
    Keep the good work going!! Would love to read more!!!❤

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    1. Anu JainOctober 26, 2020 at 11:31 PM

      I feel so much loved by reading your comment Isha.. Thanks a lot 😘

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  13. Supriya s sOctober 26, 2020 at 11:18 PM

    It's very intense write-up ..I liked how maturely your characters are shaped ..
    But ...That last para says something else ..Just waiting for the next part ..

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    1. Anu JainOctober 26, 2020 at 11:33 PM

      Thank you bhabhi 🥰
      Yes you got it right.. please read the next chapter without cursing me 😃

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  14. VidhiOctober 27, 2020 at 2:36 AM

    Amazing write up. It is very playful and keeps you engaged till the end. I just don’t want this to end and wish I could continue reading more and at the same time dreading the twist You mentioned just before finishing it. Can’t wait for next chapter.

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    1. Anu JainOctober 27, 2020 at 4:03 PM

      Awww Vidhi such lovely words yaar..
      It will end in few chapters.. won't tell you the numbers to maintain your curiosity 😜

      Yes twist is there.. its going to be painful for them. Advance mein sorry 😬

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  15. UnknownOctober 27, 2020 at 6:44 AM

    Don't want a sad ending "last bike ride" 😀
    In love with this story❤️
    story is way too engaging
    Somya

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    1. Anu JainOctober 27, 2020 at 4:07 PM

      Sorry behena 😬😬
      But I will try to give proper justification for the sad part.

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  16. vaibhavOctober 28, 2020 at 6:20 AM

    Your writing is getting better with each new chapter and i like the way you detail out each and every minute details of moments and feelings.

    I sense like you are now going to give a turn to rhis story, can't wait long to see what your amazing mind will come up with. Plz don't make us wait long ☺️

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    1. Anu JainOctober 28, 2020 at 7:56 PM

      Thanks Vaibhav for lovely review 😊
      Yes will try to publish it very soon 👍👍

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  17. SandeepOctober 28, 2020 at 11:12 AM

    Jabardast means Jabardast and Jhakas. Now there is no point of praising your writeup as now such writeups are expected from you as for me you are one of the best writers in India. It is just a matter of publicity that you didn’t get but your story is better than Chetan Bhagat’s now after the introduction of motorcycle journey and this is going to attract audiences of all the age group as inside everyone is 18 years.
    But my compliments are only for the story as once again I was searching Anirudh’s comment in this post and it was not there. So one feedback, Anirudh’s comment is the must thing for any of your writings and trust me others might also be searching for that but I am the one who is telling 😊.

    Questions:
    Cheesy romcom movie name?
    Is Mechinacal girl taller than Disha?
    If Disha wanted him to breakup then why Disha had a problem later to reply Anirudh sweetly and happily?

    Highlights:
    The starting image connecting with the story
    Drawing heart with fingers at the background of image
    Motorcycle romance 😉
    Last motorcycle journey and small ride in the last sentence which brings curiosity.

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    1. Anu JainOctober 28, 2020 at 9:58 PM

      Your comment Sandeep ji is equally Jabardast and Jhakaas!

      Will give all the answers to your questions in our scheduled call over the weekend 😃

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  18. digi cool_samyOctober 28, 2020 at 1:06 PM

    You nailed it Anu... Such amazing write up dear. Though it is a fiction but it is no less than a true story. While reading I was getting goosebumps and completely dwelled into my beautiful old days. ....love the lines written on the painting.. Just speechless dear. Keep it up!!!! 💞👌👌👌👍👍👍😘😘

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    1. Anu JainOctober 28, 2020 at 9:59 PM

      Thanks Saumya for this beautiful comment 😘

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  19. Ayushi JainOctober 29, 2020 at 11:53 AM

    I love it. The novel, the characters, the style, everything. If anyone asks me what I'm reading now a days, I answer with "Love at First Sight". It's Beautiful. Please keep writing.

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  20. ArtiOctober 29, 2020 at 11:54 PM

    Fabulous write up. Chemistry between Disha and Anirudh seems to be perfect but seeing some previous comment it seems you are not going to do justice to them.

    Wonderfully penned down each and every word in the chapter. Sometimes it seems to take the track of KKHH. Love triangle

    I already read it on the day you updated me but posting my comment late due to the already known reason to you....

    Waiting for next chapter and waiting for the twist and sensation that you are going to bring next. Each and every sentence of your write up puts up its own kind of sensation

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    1. Anu JainOctober 30, 2020 at 10:47 AM

      Hey thanks Arti for lovely review..

      KKHH no way 😁

      I know you are busy these days.. but still you found time to read and remembered to come again to write the review is commendable..

      Yes you are right.. next chapter is sensational 😃

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  21. ArchanaOctober 30, 2020 at 2:16 AM

    Fab writing Anu , I was waiting for this chapter for long time. Love the pure feelings of Anirudh and Disha for each other. The romantic bike ride was my fav part as I am always obsessed with Rain and the way you describe each and every details I could literary see them.
    I can’t compare your writing to any other romantic writer because you are very unique. Loved it 😍
    You created suspense with the “ last bike ride” line but please please don’t end the story in sad way.

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    1. Anu JainOctober 30, 2020 at 10:58 AM

      Thanks Archu 😘😘 loved your each line.. while writing our college and our hostel always comes to my mind.
      And Disha's room.. since it is in ground floor I always go back to Neha and Ritu's room.

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    2. ArchanaOctober 30, 2020 at 7:31 PM

      Yup it reminds me of our golden days at hostel 😍

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  22. UnknownOctober 30, 2020 at 10:10 AM

    Awesome narration!! Can't wait to read next chapter!! Loved the explanation of the love between Disha and Anirudh!!
    It is like I can see those characters come into life while reading. 🥰🥰
    Aparna!!

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    1. Anu JainOctober 30, 2020 at 11:03 AM

      Thanks Aparna.. I am so happy that my blog has reached till you via our common friend.

      People like you really give me confidance that my blog is actually good 😁 Otherwise own friends might have to praise sometimes in obligation 😃

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  23. DSOctober 31, 2020 at 4:53 PM

    Excellent story line...you covered so much content without losing the grip and narration was top notch...cant wait to read the next chapter....

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  24. SeemaOctober 31, 2020 at 11:47 PM

    Amazing narration.....❤️..... However u say it's a fiction....but every time I read....I find u and Nitesh .... loving caring... understanding couple ❤️❤️.....

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    1. Anu JainNovember 1, 2020 at 1:53 AM

      Thanks Seema.. story is derived from my brain so some relevance might be there in Disha's POVs. But otherwise story is totally fictional 😃

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  25. NeetaNovember 1, 2020 at 8:21 AM

    Very beautifully written Anu.Each part reminds me of the golden days of my life. Hugs and kisses to my talented friend 😘😘

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  26. UnknownNovember 1, 2020 at 8:26 AM

    U r God gifted talented girl,, amazing story..

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    1. Anu JainNovember 1, 2020 at 10:12 AM

      Thank you my unknown friend 🙏 please share your name..

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  27. MaitrayeeNovember 5, 2020 at 8:54 PM

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  28. ShaliniNovember 5, 2020 at 11:26 PM

    Too good Anu! Very well written. Each scene is described so well. I am so short of words. I could hear my heartbeats while reading especially messages from Prachi. Each part is so realistic, each scene reminds me of my college days and golden days of my life. Just cannot wait to read more and know what happens next. Keep writing dear. Hats off to you!

    Shalini

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